http://herumtreiber.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] herumtreiber.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lyonessheart 2014-04-25 07:49 pm (UTC)

I particularly loved the imagery of the rain as washing away pretenses and revealing them anew in each other's sight. Their lovemaking was a bit chaotic, and thus perfect for them! :)

Lovely fic!
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