http://fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] fantasyfiend09.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lyonessheart 2014-06-05 01:58 am (UTC)

This has such a nice narrative flow. I love the bit about Draco's usual gifts and the unintended reminder of his only-ordinary talent for potions. It made Harry's gift even sweeter.
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